I was a student at Awahono School in Greymouth and this is where I shared my learning.
Hi my name is Christina from Kokatahi-Kowhitirangi school and I like how you are talking about how big they are, where they live in the sea and what they eat.I think you should work on your punctuation.
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Hi my name is Christina from Kokatahi-Kowhitirangi school and I like how you are talking about how big they are, where they live in the sea and what they eat.I think you should work on your punctuation.
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